Verse1
I see her all alone
Sitting over there
She was with her friends
They all forgot about her
Her heart was torn apart
Chorus
It makes me feel like a thunderstorm
Seeing people not themselves and alone
Because they aren't with the people they love
It tears me into pieces seeing them with no one
I wish I can prevent this
like the sun on a rainy day
Verse2
Her old friends have a heart of stone
Leaving her like she's unknown
Then I see a guy walk up to her
Making her feel like she is a queen
All happy in the inside to be with him
Chorus
Verse3
She is a flower blooming in the open
Being joyful that there is someone that cares
Everyone should know what there is at least one
Person that cares about them
Metaphor
Similie
Allusion
that was so good it like touched my heart. nice job
ReplyDeleteI think I did well on using a good variety of literary devices. I also did well on making the lyrics sound good.
ReplyDeleteI think i can improve on using more million dollar words. I also think I can improve on making it sound less like a story and more like a song